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Friday, October 24, 2008

my prosper sentiment


i cant sleep yet. since yesterday, i woke up around 11am and awake till now and i am posting a poem, that i just thought of it, just now. read and passionate the poem the best you can do.


You, yes you dear
You have loom into my verve
As a little pixie
With the humbleness and kindness
You are not a special mankind
But you are the extraordinary kind

You, we just knew each other
Fleeting hours
Yet, we are like way too proverbial
As if we live together
Since our existence

You, we did not even rally yet
Not a single second
But yet, I am way too placate
With your panache
Which is too much too perfecto
For the very me

You, I cannot halt the deem of you
I am too culpable to do it
Because I know
Till the very recent
You are the one who calm me down
The one who carve a smile on my face
One little smile
Full with sincerity and jovial

Will I wait for you my pixie?
To reach me
For the worship

Or

Will I fetch you?
To heave your face
With obvious naked eyes
And say
“I love you”?

Is this too soon for it?
Or I am the one who keep it delay?
What is your say dear?

What is your say?

Or this is just too real
That this is a fairytale?


Your call.



4 comments:

Aida Zahrol said...

dear...this is sooo good...

i love the wording selection... admire!!!


write more...please?

Anonymous said...

well..it is not that easy to create a fine poem..

this one might be the coincident one..

still, i'm lack of thought~~ T.T

rOhock said...

aiyakkk..dalam bi...gua takpandai..haiiii!!!

Anonymous said...

hohoh..tak pandai tape..

dalam melayu pun buley~ ;)